new poem

i am wanting out
i can't take much more
its killing me every single day
does it even matter?
am i worth it?
do people care?
no matter how hard i try
it makes it worse
i am gone no matter how many people save me
its to late
to love
to hate
to care
to live
last night was the first night i felt anything in a while
the pain
the fear
was all gone
it didn't hurt anymore
it made me feel loved by them once more
not sure if it would last began to kill me
i thought me being happy would make it all better
well i was wrong it made it a little better
but the hurt that i was feeling was still inside me
i never wanted this to come true but i guess what i want and what God wants is different

Question

new poem

i am wanting out 
i can't take much more 
its killing me every single day
does it even matter?
am i worth it?
do people care?
no matter how hard i try 
it makes it worse 
i am gone no matter how many people save me 
its to late 
to love 
to hate 
to care
to live
last night was the first night i felt anything in a while 
the pain 
the fear 
was all gone
it didn't hurt anymore 
it made me feel loved by them once more 
not sure if it would last began to kill me 
i thought me being happy would make it all better 
well i was wrong it made it a little better 
but the hurt that i was feeling was still inside me 
i never wanted this to come true but i guess what i want and what God wants is different

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

feed back????

inowalst · Answer

I really like it. Great poem!

brittanydosey · Answer

i really love it, it describes feelings and kinda how im feeling. but i really like it! great poem!

horsegirl27 · Answer

Wow this is one of your best! It's so awesome! I really like how powerful each word was and how it described feelings so well!

horsegirl27 · Answer

it's also really sad. Is it true? I hope not

anonymous · Answer

nice .

anonymous · Answer

yea its starting to affect my everyday life when i start to write it makes it all go away @horsegirl27

anonymous · Answer

@j57 @Data_LG2 sorry u two

anonymous · Answer

<3


just put "God" instead of god :D
as always, great job!

anonymous · Answer

i love it baby

anonymous · Answer

i fixed it @Data_LG2

horsegirl27 · Answer

Wow this is great and @MakaylaTracy  I'm sorry it's true

hannaha · Answer

Yeah :( I think it's well written but it's sucks that it's true. If I can answer one thing, though. Everyone's worth it :)

crissy15 · Answer

baby? wow emotional

anonymous · Answer

good right ?

cheesecakekitten · Answer

too long for my taste, but great work!

anonymous · Answer

I loved ever word great work @MakaylaTracy