my poem i just start its about love an d how it cna be twist hobblie and wonderful :P its called why me

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my poem i just start  its about love an d how it cna be twist hobblie and wonderful :P its called why me

yolo_king · Answer

Do you need someone to proofread it or something?

inowalst · Answer

Where is it? @bohotness

bohotness · Answer

v_v oi cant think of a girl name

inowalst · Answer

Hmm. Okay. Destiny?

yolo_king · Answer

Theirs so many girl names... 
How about Skylar?

bohotness · Answer

my name is destiny v i used to think love was wonder but its crazy wonderful stupid and painful  but i still am in love but why me  i never throught iwould ffall in love but love is hobblie and pain when he leaves but when he is with me its wonder makes be mappy and feel loved but love can be twisted so dleaitly and break like glass with one tap all our love dissappers is full with hate and pain in sorrow   this is tobblire love is  unkind to those who dont true but those who try might succes and why me must i love him

inowalst · Answer

That's really good. Just make sure to fix some grammar errors, but other than that, great job!

bohotness · Answer

okay