Question

Poem for critique "Reverie of a Madman"

Answer 1

“Reverie of a Madman”

They say that I have problems:
Schizophrenia and such.
There's a lot more, but
I don't understand very much.

Am I crazy?
I can't possibly be!
There isn't anything
Wrong with me.

Why am I in this cage?
Just because I can't remember my name
Doesn't mean that I am insane!

If these walls could speak, what would they say?
Would they grieve for the loss of those who had been in this room,
Not realizing that their time was wasting away?

Or do people enjoy losing their minds?
Do they like the sense of clarity that it brings,
Like knowing why the caged bird sings?

The visitors I had today,
The visitors do not exist,
Or so the doctors say.

I told the doctors about the knight
Who showed me how to make pictures with raindrops on the window.
They simply said that my mind is in limbo.

The dragon told me a story
Of how he rescued the knight from the princess,
But the knight got all of the glory.

The princess tells me about the voices,
The voices, the voices that whisper all around
As you slowly feel your sanity giving ground.

“No! Stop! Get out of my head!”
At least, that's what I wanted
Before my sanity fled.

Quiet
Peaceful
Room to think
Noise
Friends
Clarity
Reason
Chaos
Insanity
What a luxury
It must be
To lose your
Mind
Completely.

My friend, what if you are the one who is in chains bound to the earth,
And I am the bird, the one who is soaring free?

Answer 2

@geneticrockhopper247 this is absolutely just incredible. i am speechless and in the best of ways. i had so much imagery and it was incredible just wow i cant even describe the amazement i have right now

Answer 3

very unique theme. data likes it <3
keep up the good work! looking forward to see more of your poems ^_^

Answer 4

@ispike Thank you very much.

Answer 5

@Data_LG2 Thanks. I'll have to start posting more of them on here. :)

Answer 6

tag me if you have new ones :P

Answer 7

Will do :)

Answer 8

yay! thanks ^_^

Answer 9

This is absolutely stunning! Well done!!!

Answer 10

Thank you, Lady.Liv1776