Ask your own question, for FREE!
Writing 20 Online
OpenStudy (anonymous):

I have been writing a few things please tell me what you guys think so far

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@trinajoy do u have an attatchment of them?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yes hold on

OpenStudy (anonymous):

mmk

OpenStudy (anonymous):

am sending it to myself sorry

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@TwilightRain1

OpenStudy (anonymous):

huh? can't u just attach it?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I am

OpenStudy (anonymous):

don't read that one yet hold on

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Read it in the order it it is

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sorry that was kinda the only way i could do it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

that's really good :). a little hard to read (blurry pics) but i think i got most of it. a few tips: in one part u said "Then I told him about what happened about Celia. Then he started running..." i wouldn't use "then" twice in a row, or "about". also, u said "digged"; i would have said "dug". other than that, its terrific! :D

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Ya sorry about that

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you though :D

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@aaronq @BloomLocke367 @Godlovesme @jeffyblood @pooja195 @skate-4-life270 @sleepyjess

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Godlovesme

OpenStudy (k_lynn):

Great job @trinajoy keep writing more :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you :D

OpenStudy (k_lynn):

You're Welcome :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I accidentally closed it lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@logan13

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sorry if there blurry

OpenStudy (logan13):

its ok 4 ****

Can't find your answer? Make a FREE account and ask your own questions, OR help others and earn volunteer hours!

Join our real-time social learning platform and learn together with your friends!
Can't find your answer? Make a FREE account and ask your own questions, OR help others and earn volunteer hours!

Join our real-time social learning platform and learn together with your friends!