Question

More of my story and hey I need a title!

Answer 1

that isnt the full ill write the rest on here @horsegirl27 @TedBunny @7777jeannie77777 @RainbowBrony555 and @K_lynn

Answer 2

@77777jeannie77777

Answer 3

AWESOME!!! :);):)

Answer 4

lol

Answer 5

She likes Jake, Jake turns on her, Avery is there for her. Avery is the one supporting her, Avery is who she has.

Answer 6

Jake is mean, Avery cares

Answer 7

yep...

Answer 8

So about a title...i jave a few ideas

Answer 9

have*

Answer 10

Like what?

Answer 11

um..A Teenage Mindset That Guy Unexpected and School Girl @horsegirl27

Answer 12

A bit long?

Answer 13

Once you get a title, make a cover page

Answer 14

Oh my goodness, I just read your story from Chapter one. You are doing a great job! I love to write myself, so it's good to see others that like to write. :)

I'll think up some ideas for a title, and get back to you. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Answer 15

Who are you planning for Avery to be? That may influence the title.

Answer 16

Well, from the story so far, it seems, she's starting to like Avery, though she liked Jake. But Jake is turning out to be mean. And Avery is there for her.

Answer 17

Thank you for reading and enjoying my book and for taking the time to think of a title :) @mavagirl552000

Answer 18

I really want to name it "the name of this book is secret" because that's the book that I thought of when I read it

Answer 19

oh yea i love that book...

Answer 20

So good!

Answer 21

it is!

Answer 22

ikr lol

Answer 23

Ooh! Great job!

Answer 24

Oh ya, the whole thing was like one big paragraph. So I put some space between people talking. I hope you don't mind :)

Answer 25

haha thanks I don't mind at all i need all the help i can get if I want this to work :P @k_lynn

Answer 26

Ok, good. And you're doing great, btw. I start writing books, but then I just forget about them and stop writing :/

Answer 27

As for the title, you could do something that describes the book. I read a book once that was called Sean Morris's Head, or something like that. It was about this girl who focuses on Sean's head. But she's not a stalker.

Well what I guess I"m trying to say is that you could title it after something that describes your book.

Answer 28

@k_lynn I love the change you made! And that's a good title idea suggestion.

Answer 29

ok..well i had 4 title that id like to use (Unexpected, That guy, A Teenage Mindset, and School Girl) but IDK

Answer 30

I like Unexpected!!

Answer 31

I like Unexpected. It seems edgy, but cool!

Answer 32

lol that's my Fav too

Answer 33

It's perfect! After all, Jake starts to like her it seems, then he is mean. And then Avery is just a kid he unexpectedly turns out to be good

Answer 34

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It's perfect! After all, Jake starts to like her it seems, then he is mean. And then Avery is just a kid he unexpectedly turns out to be good
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I agree.

Answer 35

yeah it's a good title for what's happening. You aren't expecting Jake to turn bad and Avery to turn good

Answer 36

I got the impression that Avery was some kind of mysterious person. I believe it said the mean girl (sorry i forget her name) has never seen him before. Whether it be that he just moved there, or maybe something supernatural, you may want to incorporate that into the story. :) And I like the title 'Unexpected'.

Answer 37

Yea that's kind of what I was going for and I get like 2 more votes for Unexpected as a title I'll use it

Answer 38

I agree. Make him seem very strange

Answer 39

yea will do.

Answer 40

Yay! Cool

Answer 41

well. We are all here, but no one's talking. This is boring. Let's fill this awkward silence!! I'm boredddddddd XD

Answer 42

lol

Answer 43

That didn't really help

Answer 44

lol yea im bored too XD

Answer 45

haha finally

Answer 46

Well... what to do... Let's talk about the story and what's happening

Answer 47

sure

Answer 48

I think..Sara is somewhat like me just in small ways i mean shes in high school im homeschooled shes 15 im 13 but still

Answer 49

So basically, Avery is just a kid t her school no one notices. and Sara is sorta just nobody who people like to tease. (Ahem. Megan) And then Sara like Jake, the cool popular guy. Avery starts to hang out with Sara, and Jake kisses Sara. But then Jake is mean to her. He hurts her but Avery is there to comfort her. So basically what's going to happen is Jake turns out mean, probably dates Megan and Avery is this nice guy that Sara is gonna fall in love with, right?

Answer 50

yea right and sorry I got kicked off of OS @horsegirl27

Answer 51

Maybe Jake is to embarrassed to be friends with Sara when he is around his friends, bur he secretly has a crush on her. They meet in the woods to talk, and become friends, ant they have a few close moments which hint that Jake likes her, but Avery and Sara get close, making Jake push away.

Answer 52

Or maybe, it wasn't really Jake in the woods at all, and it was Avery. Maybe there is some supernatural thing going on, and Avery disguised himself as Jake to get closer to Sara. You never know... ;)

Answer 53

lol wow you guys have so many ideas idk what to choose

Answer 54

Haha, that's the perks of writing your own story. It can end any way you want. :)

Answer 55

yea thats a good perk lol :P

Answer 56

wow..

Answer 57

Lets have Avery and Sara fall in love @koolkat13

Answer 58

Savery xD

Answer 59

haha XD

Answer 60

yea theyll get together and be savery lol

Answer 61

aww they will be so cute together <3 not that I know what they look like lol

Answer 62

lol