Question

proofread my paragraph?

Answer 1

What is the topic of the paragraph?

Answer 2

The First Amendment of the United States

Answer 3

The First Amendment of the United States guarantees Americans certain freedoms among those freedoms is the freedom of speech according to the First Amendment every American has the right to his or her own voice while there are some limitations ultimately an American has the right
to express his or her feelings in a variety of respectful and non-violent ways as an American it is important to ask yourself a question “How will I use my voice?

Answer 4

it looks good to me

Answer 5

are there commas I can add to divide independent or dependent clauses?
should I add commas to nonrestrictive phrases and introductory phrases?
where can I insert semicolons to combine independent clauses?
am I missing any periods?
did I not capitalize anything? @cvliboi

Answer 6

I had nonviolent and fixed that.

Answer 7

Here is my version of your paragraph. As you can see, I have divided some sentences and made them stand on their own. I have also added commas, a semicolon, and a colon.

The First Amendment of the United States guarantees Americans certain freedoms; among those freedoms is the freedom of speech. According to the First Amendment, every American has the right to his or her own voice. While there are some limitations, ultimately, an American has the right to express his or her feelings in a variety of respectful and non-violent ways. As an American, it is important to ask yourself a question: “How will I use my voice?"

Answer 8

wow, thanks Blossom!

Answer 9

You are welcome! ^_^

Answer 10

Did you write this paragraph? Or is it an assignment to proofread it?

Answer 11

this is my paragraph. I just don't know how to make it sound better. Now I know ! :)

Answer 12

Oh, well, then you are welcome! xD Is it just this one paragraph or is it a part of an essay?

Answer 13

It's just the one paragraph :D