The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old. I remember feeling both terrified and excited. I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up. My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.

Which sentence is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?

Question

The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old. I remember feeling both terrified and excited. I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up. My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.

Which sentence is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?

anonymous · Answer

I'd say the third sentence. 

'I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up'

That has the most imagery.

arabpride · Answer

Yes, I agree.