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OpenStudy (anonymous):

It is Friday! Poem in the comments!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Worth It or Not I don't know if you're worth it. I'm not sure I'll find out. If you are, I'll find out soon enough. If you're not, I won't regret it, Because right now, You are the only thing I want!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Love it! It's cute :) <3

OpenStudy (zyi6):

that is the most adorable thing ever!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i think you should make it longer and use some more figurative language. Right now this just looks like something i would text. It's really good it just needs to have more details because with the few u have it seems like anyone could have written it. Like i've heard it before. These are just some critics because i know i love it when people do the same for me. However when it comes to poetry the poem is not about the audience but instead the writer so if u think its perfect than its perfect.

OpenStudy (keygrover):

It's a nice poem but you needa make it longer

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@ispike thanks!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yeah... I jsut had an ispiring moment but i usually like to make my poems long.. @keygrover n @ispike

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