Question

Would you mind checking my grammar?

Answer 1

In general, most people tend to view things differently, even whether what is important of unpaid community service of student in high school? To some people, they may think that the student should have working for charity in high school programs. To some people, they may think that the student should have study in school only, it should not be activity of student. However, in my opinion, I still believe that unpaid community service is compulsory part in high school programs. The following case and examples will help support my point of view.

The first, the community service about teaching science for people in neighborhood and children makes a new experience for student for example camping activity about science knowledge is created by student in high school. It makes their

smile and enjoy. Second, the unpaid community service makes student learn about the skill of living especially the student can see that people live in their city and student get many skill from this activity. Finally, student have social intelligent for example talking with many people and the interaction in group work of their friend because of sharing about problems.

In conclusion, it is hard to make all people view things in the some way, even in the case of the community service of student in high school programs. Some people may agree that high school should have course of unpaid community service. Some people may disagree that this activity of student in high school is not important. However, to me, I absolutely agree that high school programs should have unpaid community service. The examples and case mentioned above have support my point of view to the best.

Answer 2

@arabpride :)

Answer 3

I got this I GOT THIS.

Answer 4

I don't see anything wrong with it.

Answer 5

are you sure @KyanTheDoodle ?

Answer 6

@KyanTheDoodle I skimmed over it and found some errors.

Answer 7

yes

Answer 8

For example, the first sentence doesn't flow really well.

Answer 9

The second excerpt also...

Answer 10

@gerryliyana do you mind if I take your essay and tweak it? XD

Answer 11

hahaha, No i don't, go ahead @EclipsedStar :)

Answer 12

thank you @EclipsedStar

Answer 13

Oh I need to fix a few more. XD

Answer 14

In general, most people tend to view things differently, even the importance of unpaid community services of students attending high school. Some people think that students should work for charity in high school programs. Others think that students should study in school only and does not rely on outside activity. However, in my opinion, I still believe that unpaid community service plays a compulsory part in high school programs. The following case and examples will help support my point of view.

First of all, the community service about teaching science for people in the neighborhood and children can give a new experience for a student. For example, a camping activity about scientific knowledge can be created by students in high school and can be enjoyable. Second, the unpaid community service makes students learn about living skills, especially when the student can observe others that live in their city. That student may get many life skills from doing so. Finally, students can acquire social intelligence. For example, talking and socializing with many people and interacting in group work with friends can help solve problems.

In conclusion, it is hard to make all people view things in the some way, even in the case of the community service of student in high school programs. Some people may agree that high school should have unpaid community service. Other people may disagree that this activity in high school is not important. However, I absolutely agree that high school programs should have unpaid community service. The examples and case mentioned above have support my point of view.

Answer 15

Oh yang terakhir ada yang salah XD

Answer 16

In conclusion, it is hard to make all people view things in the same way, even in the case of the community service of student in high school programs. Some people may agree that high school should have unpaid community service. Other people may disagree that this activity in high school is not important. However, I absolutely agree that high school programs should have unpaid community service. The examples and case mentioned above have support my point of view.

Answer 17

Sudah selesai saya edit :D

Answer 18

terima kasih banyak @EclipsedStar jangan bosan2 bantuin ya :)

Answer 19

Gak bosan kok, saya senang bantu :')

Answer 20

Bagus anda buat ini, gak banyk salah :D

Answer 21

terima kasih @EclipsedStar masih belajar nih

Answer 22

Gpp, sama2 :)

Answer 23

Well then. :D

Answer 24

lololol kyan :P