Question

my world is like no other
my moods change
my eyes are always black
my heart is black as coal
my life is a mess
but who cares
if this is what i am suppose to do
than i am going to do it
i will write till,
i can't do it anymore
so does this mean
i am staying yes? no?
my answer is yes for now
but it dont matter if my fans do like my poems or stories they are old no one cares i dont even care but
that was who i was and now i am nothing
but the only thing i worry about is
im loosing my life just waiting for someone to say that i am good
what i do but i don't see it happening any time soon
so all my fans on OS i dont mind if u stopped liking my work it is okay to tell me
its time for something new i dont mind
post in thr comments what u think of this

Answer 1

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! you go girl! i hope you keep writitng, even through the tough times, somethimes, the writing is all that counts.. keep it up!

Answer 2

@horsegirl27 @Destinycholie @Crissy15 @Clalgee @chainedecho @charuv @Librarian @YouSir @quickstudent @selena44 @alicia25 @uChezzy @EclipsedStar @demonchild99

Answer 3

y u no mention me....

Answer 4

haha sorry i have alot more to tpye up tii i dont want ot get in troible for mass tagging

Answer 5

feed back ????
@swagswagswagswagswag1 @WWWHHHAAATTT? @emily.getch @party_girl @redeemed1312 @rebecca99 @j57 @Alieen @aliloo

Answer 6

wwwwwwwwwwooooooooooowwwwwwwww goooood job

Answer 7

thank u

Answer 8

YES! Stay strong @MakaylaTracy you can do this! That was an amazing poem! Keep it up!!

Answer 9

welcome

Answer 10

This is so great I'm so happy u will stay here on OS, sharing ur great writing!

Answer 11

Ur so talented I'm glad u aren't throwing it away

Answer 12

@CallMeKiki @Destinymasha @Lost??? @BeautyfromPain101 @Data_LG2 @demonchild99 @Zyi6 @mysticghost @johnp12

Answer 13

YAY! I GOT MENTIONED!!!!

Answer 14

lol

Answer 15

mmmmmmmmeeeee2222222222222222

Answer 16

lol

Answer 17

See @MakaylaTracy? People love to be tagged to read ur AMAZING work!!

Answer 18

^ i agree with @horsegirl27

Answer 19

hey i still like u..and i will always like your work....u can never doubt tht chica....remember ur like my sister...lol

Answer 20

omg @MakaylaTracy why did u say ppl hate ur work and u don't think u should stay????

Answer 21

idk know why i just feel like its not my work its what other people want me to write about but my mom say i should quiet writing all together and just go quiet till i write nothing about hate and heart break love and what ever else i have written about @horsegirl27

Answer 22

Ik. But who cares what she says. Just keep writing it's your first step to staying strong

Answer 23

^I agree with @horsegirl27

Answer 24

awsome bby

Answer 25

amazing makayla! :D

Answer 26

@MakaylaTracy I'm so so so so so happy you are still writing! I have said this many times by now but its true XD I think this is one of your best poems. And I love the first few lines idk why they are just so good and you have really used cool things to describe yourself, like coal. And I just love the first line, it should be the title

Answer 27

Hey chica anytime u need to talk just call me and i will answer bc i know what it means to have a someone to talk to when u need someone to talk to so yea anything and thanks u i really do like this poem i wrote it in the 5 th grade when i was really getting bullied and being hit on my my ex bf and i didnt have much of a child hood i know i am only in high school but i really didn't know what it ws like to have friends and to have someone care about me. I was always alone. BUt i am not alone now i have u and many other friends that get me through some much. And i am thankful for this. NO MATTER IF I AM WAY FROMT HIS SITE OR NOT I WILL ALWAYS BE HERE FOR THE ONES IN NEED @horsegirl27

Answer 28

Aw thanks. And wow that's sad. I have always had a huge group of friends, I have always sat at the popular table, been friends with everyone in my grade, have a bunch of people asking to be my partner. But now I'm doing online school and now I know what it's like to be alone. I have OS friends, barn friends, and crew friends only. Not much. Only 2 girls at the barn my age, the rest way older, or younger. My neighbors are younger as well. Luckily, next year I will be going to real school, actually one of the top 10 schools in the nation! I will have friends who share my academic interests and I won't be stuck at home, bored and hating school. It's my first time ever being alone with no friends so it's difficult. At least I still talk to my friends from where I used to live, and the one comes and visits when she has a 3 day weekend or break. It's so fun when there is someone with me. And my 3 siblings are hours away at school. But my sis just left, my bros coming home, and my friend might come to. So @MakaylaTracy I completely understand and I'm glad I have my OS friends, even though they live far from me.

Answer 29

i know what u mean i have more online friends that non online firends but who cares i am just glad to have friends that care

Answer 30

I agree. that's so me right now.

Answer 31

i got mentioned lol

Answer 32

Hi Makayla, I agree that you should keep writing, but don't write about heartbreak anymore. You know that writing affects your mind and state of being, so you should write about more joyful stuff from now on. :)

Just my advice.

Answer 33

I totally agree @quickstudent