Question

poem please read and give feedback

Answer 1

My world has changed. Gone upside down.
It’s so confusing.
I’m lost.
I don’t know what to do.
Reality is settling in
Causing panic and destruction.
There is nothing to change it.
I’m sinking deeper.
I can’t escape.
But I can’t tell.
I must put on a mask
And hide what is inside me.
No one to tell.
Nothing to do.
I’m just losing control.

Answer 2

@yaraam @koolkat13 @MakaylaTracy

Answer 3

Not my usual. But I'm not usually like this. I have never been like this

Answer 4

i know..i know you well enough to know that..but this will pass...:)

Answer 5

@yaraam

Answer 6

I hope @koolkat13. Once I'm caught up in school everything will be easier

Answer 7

i would add some more to this i really liked it. Like i loved it. i really like things about the mask. However i didnt really care for how you ended it. It kinda felt abrupt maybe thats just me

Answer 8

Yeah I see what u mean. Kind of abrupt. But idk what to add that's pretty much how it is. And I'm glad u like it

Answer 9

@MakaylaTracy please read

Answer 10

omg chica damn excuse my words but this is a great work of art @horsegirl27

Answer 11

haha thx

Answer 12

Well I guess writing is always better when u write about your life because it's easier

Answer 13

your welcome

Answer 14

loved the poem.

Answer 15

Here's another poem:

It's getting harder to avoid.
I don't want it.
I don't want any of this.
There is one thing I want only.
I want it to be over.
I'm lost in this.
I'm confused.
What is happening to me?
I have never been like this.
I never thought I would.
Yet here I am.
I'm trying hide it.
No one must know.
But in some ways that's harder.
If only this were over.
So I could be happy again.
So i could do more and be free.
If only I could have the one person I want sitting beside me.
Helping me through

Answer 16

that was a nice poem

Answer 17

So basically, I'm doing online school this year so I'm really lonely. And I'm really far behind. In math I'm behind by a full unit at least, history and latin I also have so much work. And I rly hate it because I must constantly work on it and it's getting harder and it keeps piling up. I don't know what to do about it

Answer 18

Thank you!

Answer 19

waoo m just surprised u can write so beautifully its so nice and same from here just for you.

Answer 20

Aww thanks!!!

Answer 21

Yeah, u r the person in the end of the second poem

Answer 22

and im all the time here to help u and dnt worry bout math etc etc i will help out u and u r just mine.

Answer 23

ok thank you

Answer 24

wonderful poem @horsegirl27 :)

Answer 25

Thank you!!

Answer 26

:)

Answer 27

@Zyi6 what do u think?

Answer 28

it's good! i like it!

Answer 29

Thank you!

Answer 30

that second one was beautiful too :)and i totally get you about the school thing and i was falling behind just like that.... i was like 4 units behind in math though..but i got caught up and now im almost done with the years work before everyone else

Answer 31

Thank you! You need to give me tips on getting through my hw!

Answer 32

@~*Ashtyn*~