Question

dark and dangerous
the pain in her eyes is, the hurt and sorrow
trapped in those hazel eyes
those hazel eyes that turn yellow like the eyes of a ferocious beast
Anybody falls for those eyes, that catch the sun rays
Beware and bewarned for the power within
beasts are preparing and archangels are revealing
The war is near, Your fate will come and your life is a step away
be sure you choose right
for your fate is eternal
Remember the girl with the yellow eyes and the mysterious smile, is she a beast or an archangel?
No one knows but she holds a story, she has heard the Creators voice

Answer 1

@danish071996 @Chiko_1278 @Zyi6 @TheRaggedyDoctor @fallenangelorchid @demonchild99

Answer 2

Very good poem :)

Answer 3

thanks XD!

Answer 4

I'll give it a 10

Answer 5

nice job

Answer 6

Wow, I love the description of it all, amazingly ingenuousness! Nicely done lassie.

Answer 7

really? thanks

Answer 8

thanks you aren't gonna say you're meant to meet the girl? lol

Answer 9

nice poem :)