Question

Invisiblity..
his secrets and dreams, which make up his personality
Hiding and running, the rarity of fear
he covers his ears, trying to forget the thought
but it comes back, only to haunt... misery, deaths
and despair... life was never fair
If there was just one cloak, to get away from all the bloody blokes.
invisibility... this shadow, he pushed, was persistent...
he searched and searched, only to find, that being invisible, was non-existent

Answer 1

@Chiko_1278 (Sorry for the wait...)

Answer 2

I like it, I would probably change some of the words, like where you said 'He covers his ears, trying to forget the thought', I'd change 'thought' to 'sound' but either one works.

Answer 3

Good job I'll give you a 9 for what @xXToxicGummywormsXx said

Answer 4

Thanks! @xXToxicGummywormsXx

Answer 5

:)

Answer 6

wow this is good

Answer 7

great *~*

Answer 8

@bohotness @brittanydosey @Baby_Bear69 @Linn @andrewhaze xP

Answer 9

good

Answer 10

Thanks

Answer 11

brb i am lagging

Answer 12

Kk

Answer 13

its really good!

Answer 14

back xd

Answer 15

Ay thanks, and welcome back bo.

Answer 16

@Crissy15

Answer 17

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Answer 18

It's good, me perdi, @ispike

Answer 19

i thought it was awesome nice job. typically i dont like short poems but i loved this one. i dont think it would have been nearly as good if it were long. well done

Answer 20

Omg that is probably the best thing I ever read trust me I read alot! XD

Answer 21

Lol, thanks.

Answer 22

your welcome I cant even write poetry as good as you