Question

Hey Guys.Ive got a new song that I wrote{its not my best.}Give me some feedback!{In comments}

Answer 1

YOUNG SUICIDE

Verse 1
She was bored
Couldn’t think
Had perhaps
Too much to drink
Mum and Dad
Loved her so
Didn’t want
Her go to
She’d had enough
Couldn’t take the ride
Just another
Young suicide

Verse 2
Nothing wrong
Nothing right
Just another
Wasted night
Could go home
Push him away
Wake to another
Wasted day
She just felt
So dead inside
Just another
Young suicide

Verse 3
Another girl
A mother cries
Happens when
Their hope dies
Another home
Torn apart
Another love
And broken heart
You know it happens
Nationwide
Just another
Young suicide

Answer 2

Sounds like a fast paced, classic rock song. sounds GREAT FOR ME!!!

Answer 3

I dunno if its great for you but yeah its an Alt./Punk style

Answer 4

@andrewhaze

Answer 5

its good

Answer 6

Thx

Answer 7

good

Answer 8

Thanks

Answer 9

your welcome

Answer 10

@undeadknight26

Answer 11

Dont forget to medal the great musician of the song <3
Its really awesome!

Answer 12

Thanks I wrote it.

Answer 13

Your a great poet/lyric writer :)

Answer 14

Good Job @GracieBugg !!!

Answer 15

Thanks!!

Answer 16

@Skittles_5201

Answer 17

Thats is like really good @GracieBugg you should be and artist. Like become a rock star

Answer 18

Maybe One Day XD Ill be sure and give you an honorable mention lol

Answer 19

Awwweee thanks lol

Answer 20

hey hey hey

Answer 21

Yw @Skittles_5201 and Yesssss @cutiepie15

Answer 22

i like it

Answer 23

Thanks

Answer 24

@grex10 I told you I wrote so here goes my newest one.

Answer 25

@Legends You have Tennis and I have Song writing :P This is what I do

Answer 26

@robzilla=ufig--

Answer 27

those lyrics kickasss \m/

Answer 28

Told Ya I just started lol