Question

this sentece may have am errors. fix the errors.

When she began her hunt, the herd was grazing about a football field away, so were three eland and a gazelle.

Answer 1

i am not sure how to do this

Answer 2

do you know any of what could be wrong

Answer 3

no i do know

Answer 4

hold on

Answer 5

ok

Answer 6

what grade r u in

Answer 7

12th but this english that i am doing is 10th

Answer 8

Well firstly, this looks like a run-on sentence

Answer 9

yes it does

Answer 10

i am just do lost with English i am good in math

Answer 11

When she began her hunt, the herd was grazing about a football field away, so were three eland and a gazelle. Maybe to split it up, we can say
When she began her hunt, the herd, along with three eland and a gazelle, was grazing about a football field away. That still sounds a bit dodgy but it might fix it up a bit.

Answer 12

i am still lost

Answer 13

I understand, it is a bit difficult, and I'm in a lower grade so I'm a bit confused as well. Let's see how we can try to break it down, then?

Answer 14

ok

Answer 15

but how can we fix the sentence

Answer 16

i think that this is right but not sure

When she began her hunt, the herd was grazing about a football field away,
and so were three eland and a gazelle.

Answer 17

I'm sorry but I was never any good at English.

Answer 18

ok

Answer 19

I feel as if I have failed you, I'm sorry! I've been trying to break it down and figure out why it sounds a bit off to me, but I just can't seem to figure it out.

Answer 20

it is ok

Answer 21

Okay