Question

Poem Wednesday! Poem in the comments.

Answer 1

Not Just Friends

First, you were a stranger.
Then we started talking.
And you became my friend.
I went through a depressing moment,
And you were always there, holding my head.
Suddenly you were my best friend.
But that is not enough for me;
I want us to be more.
I just don't want to show,
That you make me glow.
I'm torn between telling you or not.
Picking petals off flowers like,
Should I tell him,
Should I tell him not?

Answer 2

omg!! That's awesome and funny because that's how I feel

Answer 3

@koolkat13 @Ravenn @ispike @Crissy15 @k_lynn @horsegirl27 Tell me what you guys think!
I thought it wasn't really that good... my past poems were better but for some reason I am lacking inspiration...

Answer 4

Basically met someone, became my friend, depressing moment, he held me up, I told him, he told me.

Answer 5

It's really good I like it

Answer 6

@horsegirl27 so do you guys date?

Answer 7

yeah

Answer 8

Read my post I made

Answer 9

that's cute

Answer 10

thx

Answer 11

I like it, i had that same thought a few days ago

Answer 12

its really good

Answer 13

it has good structure and its a good poem but its extremely cliche. take this experience youre trying to write about and put it in an entirely new perspective.