It's poem Friday!!! Okay my fellow Open Studiers, you know the deal: Read the poem in the comments and then tell me what you think about it! Thanks!!!
You You make me smile, You make me blush, You are the reason why, To my class I have to rush!
Sorry, this poem is really short, and I usually write poems that are 10 to 20 lines long but this past few days, I've been going through a really hard time (@koolkat13 knows) and I haven't been at my best. Thanks anyways for taking the time to read my poem!!!
Wow that is so good do u mind if I tag someone here?
And I'm sorry ur going through a hard time :(
I like it, it's short and sweet. (like me! Minus the short part :P XD)
@horsegirl27 yeah go ahead tag away!
ok
and yeah it is short because someone told me that i don't usually rhyme in my poems so I wrote this...
I do like rhyming poems but sometimes I feel poems that don't rhyme can have a bigger impact.
yeah because it is sometimes hard to find just the right words!
ikr!! And rhyming poems tend to be more fun and upbeat usually and if you are writing a poem about sadness or love or anger or just anything, sometimes if you just choose powerful words even if they don't rhyme, then it will have a bigger impact and meaning.
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