Question

as i am writing this i dont know what to think anymore

my life is great,
my heart gold,
my smile is real.
the world around me
is still spinning.
no matter what i do.
i cant seem to break the fire
all they do is send them flying .
i get hit. I fall down.
I scream in pain.
NO one comes to my aid.
Its not that i can't take it, but this really hurts me .
my cried get louder and louder
no one hears them.
i want to have help, but how do i ask for it

Answer 1

Great poem. and I can totally relate to it. Good job! it's really sad though :(

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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Answer 4

@Destinymasha @Compassionate @cupcakerain @j57 @ariel52599 @chainedecho @charuv @asapcookie @uChezzy @babygirl87 @VictoriaJustice9110 @beastieman21 @aaron12345678910

Answer 5

@MakaylaTracy hey so its really good i liked it a lot. But i have a challenge for u try and figure out what words you r consistently using and try to avoid them for a bit. its harder than it sounds trust me

ps if u ever need someone to talk to im always here

Answer 6

okay i will try thank u an no i have not

Answer 7

@Michaels_Paradox

Answer 8

Grammar is a little, and it's a good piece.

Answer 9

@sikinder

Answer 10

nice poem

Answer 11

even me too is a poet

Answer 12

@MakaylaTracy