Question

Hey so i wrote a two paragraph thingy lol
Critic or whatever let me know what u think

Answer 1

Sometimes all I can think about is why I even attempt in getting back up, when I know I’m just going to fall back down. I often feel like a bouncy ball heading towards the train tracks. It’s only a matter of time for me to be caught in the webs of the tracks, and then it’s just patience until the day I finally go splat! Then I tell myself, “that’s not true”, and I’m stuck, conflicted in my mind. I can’t wait for the day when a single side wins. However, there are several battles in war, before a side admits defeat, and the other is boosting its victory. So I suppose all I wonder is when the battles end. I’m seventeen and I feel like I’ve been living in this war of constant confliction for my entire life. Every day is another battle, another fight, with a different victor, so that’s a total of 6,205 battles. Take away the first three years in which I don’t remember and that leaves 5,110 battles. It’s no wonder why I feel so drained all the time.

I want to wake up one morning and there be a continuous feeling of pure bliss. They say ignorance is bliss, but for one day ignorance doesn’t sound too bad. In fact I think I would gladly take on the life of an ignorant person, if that means peace…but then I consider all the people who I would hurt with my ignorant mouth. There I go again, conflicted. I can never make up my mind because there’s two sides to everything. However, the problem isn’t that there’s two sides. The problem is that they both make sense. Like neither side is right but neither side is wrong, and the people who see one side of an argument tend to be blinded by faith or whatever’s blocking there view. So I suppose I would much rather be conflicted then blinded. I would much rather be grey than white, and I would much rather be white than black…so grey it is. So confliction may make feel like the rope in tug of war, but at least I can see the truth.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

amazing and thank u for the advice

Answer 4

This is so amazing! I love everything you write. You are talented and honest, and it shows through your writing

Answer 5

its so beautiful and honest youre writing is always good!

Answer 6

That's a really interesting point that you have so succinctly and accurately summarized. I've really never thought about it like that. Beautiful.

Answer 7

I loved this... do you mind if i print it out so that everytime I feel like crap, I can read it? @ispike

Answer 8

@MakaylaTracy lol no prob and thanks

Answer 9

@horsegirl27 lol thanks girl

Answer 10

@geneticrockhopper247 thank you so much

Answer 11

@heypips of course not go ahead and print just make sure that if anyone asks about the writer u give me credit Jordann Poteet

Answer 12

yw

Answer 13

amazing!

Answer 14

@emmilinev thank you

Answer 15

welcome! ;)

Answer 16

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Answer 17

great job this is amazing :D

Answer 18

@ispike okay thanks!!!

Answer 19

@nothingwasthesame thank you