Question

can you change some words below sentences? 'Political pressure to address land rights did not arise on the public agenda until the early 1960s, after the expansion of the minerals sector and fundamental changes to the pastoral economy. There was no policy innovation, either state or Commonwealth, to deliberately recognize or protect a concept of Indigenous land rights'

Answer 1

Political pressure from groups to address land rights did not occur until the early 1960s, after growth in the minerals sector and large much needed changes to the pastoral economy. There was no change of policy for either state or Commonwealth, to purposely recognize or protect a concept of Indigenous peoples land rights.

Answer 2

Pressure to land rights didn't occur until the 1960s; after the growth of the minerals sector and changes to the economy. There was no policy innovation, either state or Commonwealth, to recognize a concept of Indigenous land rights.

Answer 3

The induction of political pressure in the scope of land rights did not take place until the early 1960s after the improvement in the minerals sector significant transformation in pastoral economy. There was not any policy innovation, with the intention to consider and protect Indigenous land rights.