Question

Another piece I wrote. Critique :D

Answer 1

The woman from my lucid dream
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Her hazel eyes,
wore my body like
a silk seductive corset.
Frame was slender, yet
provocative at the right
angles.
Beauty casting shadows amongst
others; leaving a trail of angelic
nuances.
Smooth cuticles rest upon those
gentle hands.
Brunette hair that captivates
my spectator's eye, within
this labyrinth of a lifestyle
that I have.
Curvaceous lips that're beyond
potent; so voluptuous to the
point that it attracts microbial
archaea within the darkest crevices.
Distinct nose that is prominent,
and is beyond sexy among other
facial features with-on her;
to which I can survey with my
retinas.
I lay here, while the constellations
toy with my emotions, whilst the moon
invokes sensationalizing feelings,
that lay dormant within this ferocious lion.
She's the ink to my parchment.
The blood to my veins.
Unique iris pigmentation
that rests upon my pupils.
Oxygen wouldn't be worth inhaling,
if her essence wasn't exhaled every-time
we conversed.
@MakaylaTracy

Answer 2

omg i like the part where it says
Brunette hair that captivates
my spectator's eye, within
this labyrinth of a lifestyle
that I have.

Answer 3

Glad you enjoyed it.

Answer 4

me too