Laws of physics Laws of love of time and space and the (in)between place (in)between you and me and where we are lost and looking looking and lost ~Feel free to tag anyone in the comments but *NO MASS TAGS* no more than 5 people at a time Lol~
@horsegirl27
Oh wow that's really good! I like it!
Thanks <3
@cupcakerain @Baby_Bear69
I love it!
thx
"looking and lost" I like that
I usually just write down anything that pops in my head... How that got there I don't know... But thanks :)
@emmilinev
@january123
amazing!
AWESOME GAL!!!
Thanks <3 @january123 & @emmilinev
any time gal
WELCOME!
when i first started to read it i thought wow this is amazing. A tad bit cliche but different enough to call it your own. However, i would add in some more lines in between some of the lines you already have. Just to make it flow better. i really do like it you just need to add some things
Lol thanks I just don't really make flowing and rhythmic poems :p I just write what pops in my head lol
@ispike
@~*Ashtyn*~ im the same way so i have to do the same thing some times.
Good to know I am not alone :)
In the way I write lol
Lovely poem! I really LOVE it! :) @~*Ashtyn*~
Thanks :)
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