Question

I miss you dearly
My darling you know its true,
But you left me lonely
And there's nothing I can do.
I gave you my everything
My purity, my strength
You took it all from me
Even though I believed
I thought you loved me for sure
I took out my pain on the world
All thanks to you
Now you have another girl
(GOSH THIS POEM SUCKS. ANYONE WANNA HELP ME REDO IT?) yes I wrote it don't make fun of me XD

Answer 1

Sure.

Answer 2

great

Answer 3

this is good you shouldnt change it. if it came from the heart than keep It :)

Answer 4

Well thank you a lot! @kd0116

Answer 5

your welcome

Answer 6

so you dont get in trouble you might wanna post these in writing

Answer 7

But I turn my poems into songs.... I usually play piano with them but I cant really put the sheet music on here @andrewhaze

Answer 8

oh ok