Question

What do you think

Answer 1

@HannahA

Answer 2

Lol crazy random, I just saw you became my fan then you mention me :D Hold on I'll check it out

Answer 3

Looks pretty good! However, you might want to change things like "Went" to something more specific :))))) Sounds like an interesting story

Answer 4

what do you mean when you say "you might want to change things like "Went" to something more specific" like what

Answer 5

@HannahA

Answer 6

Well, you said went but you might want to put "walked" or "jogged", "lumbered", something that describes what they were doing. Certainly not groundbreaking but helpful

Answer 7

ok that makes sense thanks

Answer 8

Sure :)

Answer 9

@serenacox @bracefacee