Question

another piece of writing please read and critic

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Very informative, yet entertaining and catchy, keep up the good work.

Answer 3

@fallenangelorchid lol thanks

Answer 4

I'm considering to start really making this book called Noting Society. It will be things like this and my paragraphs from yesterday. There wont be paragraphs just notes what do u think?

Answer 5

Walking is definitely preferable to falling but the balance can be difficult. Um, on the second line, I think it should be then rather than "than." Nice writing.

Answer 6

I'd buy it.

Answer 7

@geneticrockhopper247 okay cool i will for sure fix that thanks. And cool

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Perfectionism is something I have to fight on a daily basis. It’s a part of who I am, and if I’m not perfect then I somehow feel like nothing. Then amount to nothing. The thing is, trying to be perfect takes just as much effort as trying to be nothing. So it’s a matter of finding the balance between the two. However, when it comes to balancing, I tend to be the first person to fall on my face. I start at the balance beam ready to fight and believing in myself, but somehow with the smallest wind of doubt I start to sway back and forth until I fall. So I’m either falling on my facing and face planting the ground, or I’m way high on the beam, unsteady. There’s no in between, like I can never be grounded. For once I just want to be the person who’s walking. I don’t want to fly with the birds because I know I don’t have the wings to sustain myself. I will fall! I always do. The birds are just there for looks as they strive for perfection, but I’m not a bird; “I’m a fish being taught to climb a tree.”

Answer 9

This is awesome! It would be cool if you wrote your own book, I'd buy it.

Answer 10

amazing

Answer 11

@k12andstudyislandhelp thanks and yea i just dont know how to like get it into a book like i could publish it on wattpad or writers cafe but like i would prefer to write it as a book u can buy i just dont know how

Answer 12

@MakaylaTracy thank u

Answer 13

@ispike I am a writer also and i have this tiny url of a google search i did. Maybe you could find a website that interest you. I would try the Amazon one though. http://tinyurl.com/Publishing-My-Book

Answer 14

yea ive heard a lot about amazon mmmk i will check it out thanks @k12andstudyislandhelp

Answer 15

ok. YW