Question

can someone give me feedback on my paper

Answer 1

Do you ever worry about the environment? Do you think that there are problems with the environment? Here are some solutions to save and make the environment a safe and happy place.
1. We could start using bikes a lot more often instead of using cars. If you are traveling a small distance you could use a bike. But if you are traveling a far distance you could use a car.
2. Families could start only having one car because the can reduce the world from being harmed anymore. If families use only one car this can stop the world being harmed. But if families use more than one car it can cause something bad to happen.
3. People can start using recycling instead of using the garbage can for everything. If people don’t recycle the world will one day become filled with garbage all over the place. But if people start recycling we can stop this from happening. Those are just some examples here are some more.

4. We can remove the dangerous chemicals from the air to reduce allergies. If we can stop the dangerous chemicals from the air that we breathe maybe we can reduce allergies. If we don’t stop the smell of the air the air will become horrible and soon everybody will have allergies.
5. We should stop the use of bug spray because not only is it bad for our heath it is also bad for insects and some plants. If we keep on using pesticides it will make our health worse and worse as we keep on using it. But if we stop using it will not affect our health.
6. People should stop hunting for animals. If we continue to hunt we will have no more wild life animals and that would be a bad thing because they help us out sometimes. If we don’t hunt anymore we will have more wild animals and that would be a good thing because animals are a part of this world.

7. We should stop pollution on the streets. If we keep throwing garbage out of our windows it will become worse and can also reach the ocean and kill ocean animals. If we stop pollution it won’t become worse and it will also not kill ocean animals. If it reaches the ocean it can also cause us to drink dirty and gross water.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

many people could come up with counter arguments very easily because what you say is very cliche and vague. The writing itself is good

Answer 4

less lika list

Answer 5

Thank you

Answer 6

unless it's suppose to be a list i assumed it was

Answer 7

it was

Answer 8

yea thats what i figured

Answer 9

if you want i can tell u how people would argue the oppisite sides so that u know how to be like sorry but that doesnt work because...

Answer 10

can you

Answer 11

yea give me one second we will take it number by number

Answer 12

okay 1 is fine so im gonna start with 2

my family cant have one car. Most families cant have one car. Because we all have to be a different places all at once. There's not enough time for us all to be driven around by a single car.

Answer 13

3 is good

Answer 14

okay

Answer 15

alright so 4. U never mention how you can keep chemicals from the air.

Answer 16

okay

Answer 17

5 if we dont use bug spray how on earth am i suppose to keep myself from getting bite? some bugs even carry diseases. i would much rather use bug spray than get some of those diseases.

Answer 18

the next one i can honestly say i disagree with. Humans are designed to eat meat. People who r vegetarians have to make sure they get protein in other things. most of those things are unliked by many people. Animals hunt other animals so why shouldnt we hunt them? We are all designed this way for a reason. There is a distinct difference between pouching and the circle of life

Answer 19

okay

Answer 20

And for the last one i agree with u up until your last point. The water we drink is typically drawn from fresh water lakes. There are very few water treatment plants that draw water from the ocean. Those plants cost a lot of money because they have to remove the salt from the water. Water can be cleaned.

Answer 21

i hope this helps

Answer 22

i did a lot thanks