breaking my heart is just how it feels to you you go riping it down the me this pain is just to much that time can not erase! with out thought with out a soul i feel like im a nothing i feel like i reached the dEATH ,just kill me now dont save me frozen inside the life among the dead

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breaking my heart is just how it feels to you you go riping it down the me this pain is just to much that time can not erase! with out thought with out a soul i feel like im a nothing i feel like i reached the dEATH  ,just kill me now dont save me  frozen inside the life among the dead

anonymous · Answer

@SyedMohammed98 @grex10 @Dustinself42 @Makayla_scvcs

anonymous · Answer

@sam9818

anonymous · Answer

its good and i sung it it sounds good when u sing it

owlcoffee · Answer

Interesting lyrics.
Again, it is challenging to imagine a rythm for it. But it is interesting.
I would suggest you use punctuation so it doesn't feel like a whole phrase without pause.

anonymous · Answer

oh hahahhahahahahaha ok owl :)

anonymous · Answer

good job! I have a song i wrote too!

anonymous · Answer

posy it i wanna hear it

anonymous · Answer

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0Y1KJqFap2n

anonymous · Answer

You want me to post my song and im not gonna sing it because many many people have told me i have a horrible voice sorry

anonymous · Answer

its cool i think i do but

anonymous · Answer

people say i sound good

anonymous · Answer

hmm ok well i can type the first part of my song