Question

I'm writing a story for an english class, i want to base all the characters off the 7 deadly sins. but i'm having trouble trying to portray the sins without spelling them out.

Answer 1

You should give characteristics of them, like work around them
for example lying
you could make it a person that deceives and screws people over without actually saying the word

Answer 2

doesnt even have to be a person it could be, the wind, an animal, anything really

Answer 3

yeah so like have a name like bob i don't know and have them lie and cheat and steal or something

Answer 4

the story is about 7 men who go in on an adventure and each represent a sin and how it kills them

Answer 5

Peter- pride he is very prideful and thinks he can get anything anytime but insecure when he dosent get what he wants
Wren-Wrath She was always getting angrey from a young age and would always take it out on others always fighting and hurting things that did nothing wrong to her

Edward-Envy He would watch all the popular people in school everyday planning how to be like then always wanting to be like them. No body liked him why not why not
Samantha -Sloth smart but never shows it. IN school she would never do the work but somehow would pass with all Cs would rather be eating and watching tv then homework. fat and lazy

Greg-Greed He was rich very rich but wanted more. More . MORE always woullld take and never give he would put money with a string in a vending machine and luch and pull it out getting what he wanted for free and eating then never paying a cent

Gracy-Gluttony hungery always hunger for more more must eat more. She became fat doing so comeing to school in a wheelchair and eats anytime she could getting odd looks and picked on but she didn't care she just wanted more MORE MOOOOREE

Lance_lust he was a complete perv a jerk and out right rude. He would do it to anyone and kept touching people feeling them making things awkward

Have them meet by transferring to the same school and have them as a Group and kinda rule the school and make it like a living hell maybe??

Answer 6

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Answer 7

yeah that's cool

Answer 8

yoo hella good idea !

Answer 9

thanks, i like you ideas its along what i was thinking

Answer 10

i really just need help with introducing the characters giving hints about there personality. iv done greed. but now i need to introduce the other 6

Answer 11

I mean beep Kenzy your idea is awesome :3 I LOVE IT so I could help with that what do you have with greed

Answer 12

what did you do for greed ?

Answer 13

the story starts in a small town near a large mountain. no one goes near it and everyone is afraid, until the town people all start to talk about treasure. greed whose name is greg is so blinded by his want for the treasure he assembles a team of 6 to go with him to explore a raid the mountain.

Answer 14

greed is a rich man, whos always had enough but is never not working because he always wants more.

Answer 15

why dont you make each town a sin ?

like describe the people without using the actual words

Answer 16

that would be cool

Answer 17

up to you obv just giving ideas :)

Answer 18

omg the story was great, thanks for your guys help

Answer 19

That's awesome!