It's that day my fellow Open Studiers!!! Poem Friday! You know the deal guys: Poem in comments, read, comment, critique!!!

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anonymous · Answer

Cheating Memory

The days come and go 
As I sit staring ou the window,
Thinking about your betrayal.
You cheated, you lied.
You said you loved me,
I doubt it was true.
Now all I want to do
Is forget about you.
The memories get in my way,
And no one helps ease the pain.
I haven't cried.
You're not worth my tears.
Although this cheating memory,
Will remain with me for many years!

anonymous · Answer

@koolkat13  @ispike @horsegirl27 @Crissy15 @Librarian @fallenangelorchid @Godlovesme @ilovewolf @k_lynn  Sorry if I forgot to tag you!

anonymous · Answer

I have no critiques. It was beautiful. Although I am no professional.

anonymous · Answer

good job

anonymous · Answer

@IHateSchoolWork thanks @Twetapoo thanks

anonymous · Answer

beautiful

anonymous · Answer

Thanks @ispike