Question

Which is the best way to rewrite sentence 3?
Earlier, most vending machines will be filled with healthy snacks like trail mix and granola.
Lastly, most vending machines will be filled with healthy snacks like trail mix and granola.
In addition, most vending machines will be filled with healthy snacks like trail mix and granola.
Similarly, most vending machines will be filled with healthy snacks like trail mix and granola.

@solidrebirth

Answer 1

(1) The school has a new plan to keep kids healthy. (2) Starting next year, students will have a hard time buying a soda from a vending machine, as the district is getting rid of many of its vending machines with junk food. (3) Most vending machines will be filled with healthy snacks like trail mix and granola. (4) The school district is making it hard for students to eat poorly. (5) The menus in the district are having a face-lift. (6) Gone are the trans fats and sugary staples like pizza and sloppy joes. (7) Students will get more choices of vegetables and greens. (8) The district expects some people won't be happy. (9) However, they are not too worried. (10) They hope that their students will be healthier even if they aren't happier.

Answer 2

I'd get rid of A and B

Answer 3

Similarly sounds a bit iffy to me, so I'd go with C

Answer 4

Your right :)

Answer 5

Which is the best way to rewrite sentence 9?
Suddenly, it's easier to face a new challenge if you have people there to support you.
In the end, it's easier to face a new challenge if you have people there to support you.
Similarly, it's easier to face a new challenge if you have people there to support you.
Earlier, it's easier to face a new challenge if you have people there to support you.

Answer 6

(1) Starting a new school is hard for many students. (2) You have to get over the first day jitters. (3) The nervous feeling you get doesn't go away all at once. (4) It may be well into the school year before you get comfortable. (5) You have to make new friends. (6) Making new friends can be just as difficult. (7) Many people going to a new school are reserved and too shy to make new friends. (8) Making new friends is the most important part of fitting into a new school. (9) It's easier to face a new challenge if you have people there to support you.

Answer 7

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Answer 8

What would you guess? Mine is B :]