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I need space
i have no way of knowing love
my soul is leaping to its death.
the world is like a shell once it breaks it cant be replaced
my heart was shattered along time ago.
not only from you but from many others.
One person can only take so much.
The only thing i have left is the memories and pictures of us.
You took away everything else.
My eyes are never open.
I am always covered up crying.
I never leave my bed.
And you think that you caused this?
No you didn't i caused this my self.
Because i left you in. Don't mean you can stay.
I am done feeling sorry for my self.
I have you to thank for that.
You opened my eyes.
You made me leave.
You see what happens when you do?
I'm closing you out.
Its hard enough trying to forget you.
But now its hard even thinking about your name.
Trying to keep it all in.
I can't hold it back anymore.
Its over
I am letting go more than i have before.
I am closing you out.
I can't keep it .
Its pain full.
They are always scaring .
You always told me scars don't matter.
But in my mind they are what shaped me to who i am now.
I started with you now im ending it with you.
Dont ask me questions okay.
I am not answering them.
I have lost so much in the past few years.
You didn't even ask if i was okay ?
or how are you today?
Can i help you?
nothing is ever passed
you always say you will be fine
the thing is i was never fine.
i was aways holding it behind my true self
and you only seen my fake side.
I have always wondered what was going to happen
when things get to much
it makes me feel like i have nothing left to live for

Answer 1

That's beautiful!
Did you write this?

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yes i did i am a writer and thank you if u want you can tag people to this to chare this with anyone i am trying to get my work out there @GirlgoyleH.

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Answer 4

Its amazing

Answer 5

very nice
you don't need to tag people to tell you how awesome this is. This is very good.
@MakaylaTracy

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Answer 10

cool

Answer 11

This is great!! :) Keep writing because it's amazing!

Answer 12

OMG!! :'( I almost cried this is AMAZING!! @makaylatracy u did an awesome job keep writing and tagging me :p

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thank u so much i was told my writings are fgetting old

Answer 14

THIS IS A MASTERPIECE

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@MakaylaTracy

Answer 16

keep up the great work

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>:( that's not true, ur writing are never old!!! U r an amazing writer and ur writings are awesome :) keep writing pleease :p

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Writings***

Answer 19

Hey @makaylatracy I just noticed that ur title is 'mighty pen' SOO TRUE!! :D

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awww thanks @Godlovesme

Answer 21

Damn... ~Ahem~ Pardon my language, but this was truly amazing lassie!!!

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anytime :) @makaylatracy

Answer 23

Wow, deep! Does well at putting thoughts into words :)))
I have one thought, tho, if you want to make it even more impacting, imagery makes it more real for me. Great job!! @makaylatracy

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Why is my feedback needed????? You know already that its amazing! No words to describe your talent for writing!!! Keep up the amazinglyterrificwork! Lol <3
@MakaylaTracy

Answer 25

That is incredible. So emotional.

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I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!! ^.^