Question

Hello all. :)
I just started to get back into writing, and started to write a story. I would love for people to check it out, and let me know what you think. I am just starting to get the story going, so if anyone has suggestions, I'm all ears.

The summary is in the comments, along with the link to the first chapter. TIA :)

Answer 1

Laura Holden had her four years of high school planned. Keep her head down, only join a minimal amount of activities, try not to be noticed, study hard to get into a good college, and definitely NO boys.

She thought she was doing good, being a senior and not going against her plan, but all of that changed when the vacant house next to hers was sold to a Mr. and Mrs. Carson, who happened to have a daughter, AND a son.

When Laura finds out eighteen year old Sam Carson is going to be her neighbor AND is attending her school, she doesn't know what to do. Her low profile suddenly vanishes, and it seems like everyone knows who she is- Sam's neighbor.

The way Sam looks at her, it makes her heart flutter with excitement. He was different from the other guys, and the more he was around, the more confused she got. Will she fight to her high school plan going, or will she fall for the cute and cocky boy next door?

Answer 2

And here is the link :) - http://www.wattpad.com/story/35279285-my-next-door-neighbor

Answer 3

Oh I read it :) Really nice! I added it to my reading list. So yeah, hoping for the next part ;)

Answer 4

I will have the next chapter up in the middle of the week, or earlier if I have time. :) Thank you!

Answer 5

wow this is good!

Answer 6

Aww thank you! :)

Answer 7

yw!

Answer 8

OMG @mavagirl552000 for some reason my computer says that it is blocked... wish i could read it though!!!

Answer 9

Huh, I wonder why it's saying that. I had the same issue with a friend's story a few days ago. I will look into it. Here is the link again to see if it works.
http://www.wattpad.com/myworks/35279285-my-next-door-neighbor

I am working on getting it into a document form to post, so you'll be the first to know :)

Answer 10

okay thank you!!! But it is still saying it is blocked.

Answer 11

you have to make more of that story. it is amazing!

Answer 12

Thank you @Twetapoo :) I should have the next chapter up in the next few days. If it wasn't for school, I would be working on writing all day. lol

Answer 13

lol haha yay

Answer 14

i cant wait

Answer 15

wow ur soo good at writing! Keep on writing and you'll get famous one day @mavagirl552000

Answer 16

Thanks @ElonaSushchik ! It means a lot to hear that. :)

Answer 17

I read it. It was awesome! I can't wait to read more!

Answer 18

Thank you @maddie91101 :)

Answer 19

Aah, that was very interesting! I would most definitely read more! :00 I especially loved all of those witty comebacks, heh.

Answer 20

That is really good I am writing a book about werewolves. But yours will be better I really do like your writing.

Answer 21

I love it....Tag me in when u update more of the story please !@mavagirl552000

Answer 22

@mavagirl552000

Answer 23

Thanks everyone for your support! I am hoping to have the next chapter posted tomorrow, but I will definitely let you all know when it's up.

Answer 24

Cant wait!

Answer 25

when is another chapter going to be posted?

Answer 26

i really enjoy this story

Answer 27

I was going to post it over the weekend, but I thought of some last minute details, so I am ALMOST done. lol Will let u know when i post it.

Answer 28

oh good, well glad it will be very nicely written and detailed.

Answer 29

@ElonaSushchik @horsegirl27 @Twetapoo @shsl_horseface @maddie91101 The next chapter is posted. :D

Answer 30

i cannot wait until 3rd chapter. this is amazing.

Answer 31

hey girlie! when is your next chapter coming out?