Question

My heart is going black
and i want it to turn back
but it won't
i don't know why
maybe because i am broken
my life is fading
the room is closing in
i use pain to get away

I know i might die
i know i should love life
my everything is dark
my heart was red
but now it is black as night
i don't need help
i need to be left alone
i want to go
and leave the hectic world

Answer 1

@DarkMoonZ @bohotness @henrry123 @WolfMaster @freegirl112

Answer 2

not a great poem

Answer 3

dont say that its better than most keep trying here are some pointers just do what your heart is telling you to write and do what every u fell is right keep it up u will get better in no time @TeenWolfGirl

Answer 4

I love it

Answer 5

Its nice

Answer 6

Thank you

Answer 7

:)

Answer 8

@chosenmatt @Skittles_5201 @Tazmaniadevil @DarkMoonZ @monkeys

Answer 9

Its great ^-^

Answer 10

Thanks

Answer 11

np

Answer 12

The first part kind of confuses me, but everything else is great