Question

Poem (of sorts). Feedback requested. The name of it is "Paradoxical Person."

Answer 1

I am snarky and I am sweet.
I am gentle and I am sarcastic.
I am quiet and I am loud.
I scream and I am silent.
I listen and I speak.
I fight and I love.
I write and I read.
I fail and I succeed.
I am defeated and I am victorious.
I am peace and I am rage.
I am a friend and I am an enemy.
I cry and I smile.
I am strong and I am broken.
I am a beacon and I am invisible.
I am light and I am dark.
I destroy and I repair.
I remember and I forget.

I am not a box that can be labeled.
I am a human being.

I am a walking talking paradox.
You can't put me in a box.

Answer 2

Gosh... I LOVE THIS!!! @geneticrockhopper247 This is awesome! Love it!

Answer 3

@Heypips Thanks a lot :)

Answer 4

@geneticrockhopper247 No prob.

Answer 5

This could go to a cool techno-beat Its nice!

Answer 6

From poet to poet, I like it a lot. It has meaning to it, it's not sad or about suicide like most poems these days. It makes a statement to society that labels cannot define a human being. We are not some robot they can program with labels and what we should act like because of what they think we are. So, kudos. (:

Answer 7

WOW. So amazing!!

Answer 8

I like that!

Answer 9

@Data_LG2 @ispike

Answer 10

@geneticrockhopper247 honestly im not really big into poems that repeat things like the word I. It's a style of poetry that just doesn't interest me. i like the ending but i feel like the last two lines while powerful and amazing are not very original. I've heard that exact thing a million times. But still it is very powerful. Dont take any of this personally because your poem is amazing without a doubt. Looking at the actual writing of it i have no critics except for those last two lines. Other than that u r extremely talented just not my style is all