Question

this is an older one of my poems but also one of my favs so let me know what you think

Answer 1

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@blopez02 @inowalst @k12andstudyislandhelp

Answer 2

The entrance of this room spirals down feelings in which

I cant deny

But cry out the loath I feel

Reeling down to a collapsation of ligament falsification

And the Imagination has been discriminated

Fore you will never hear what I have confronted

the reality specified

Delusions that and in the conclusions

That I bleed in truth

So you end in the right and I end in the wrong

So life is no longer a song but a nightmare

Entered by her mind

pulling down the rest of the room

so that they can prove that they were right

but silence we squeak due to you

and our freedom has been provoked

so that you could help us soaked

in cloak of regulations

In which we didn't need to know

but had to grow in knowledge

that was unneeded!

yet we were feed the dead

and writings that never showed the truth!

So prosper was never concluded...

Just your illusion!

Answer 3

Wow. I feel like I'm there with you. Wow.

Answer 4

@geneticrockhopper247 thanks

Answer 5

Great! It's a talent!

Answer 6

i really hated that teacher

Answer 7

@YanaSidlinskiy lol thanks

Answer 8

I can tell. Hatred to the max. :) No problem.

Answer 9

@YanaSidlinskiy yea she was a special teacher as u can tell

Answer 10

;) Special teachers= slow thinking.

Answer 11

lol

Answer 12

ITS AWESOME <33333333

Answer 13

@cupcakerain thanks

Answer 14

@january123

Answer 15

NOICE!!

Answer 16

thanks @january123

Answer 17

Goodness, @ispike, I love this!!!

Answer 18

me too!

Answer 19

@heypips thanks

Answer 20

@horsegirl27 thanks

Answer 21

@mattrobakk

Answer 22

@ispike wow, speechless. Definitely have talent. Keep it up!!!

Answer 23

@mattrobakk i tagged u in the wrong post lol but thank u

Answer 24

tag me in the other one too! @ispike