Question

My sister wrote this random story and I wanted to share!! ^-^ (warning:this story is by a 3rd grader so don't judge ^_^)

Answer 1

The Random House
By: Heather Kalile
Once upon a time the random house family settled down to go to sleep. Tommy the Pig heard a caterwauled of Bob the Dog wanting to get inside cause it was pouring down rain. Bob did NOT like rain. >:( Tommy tried to go to sleep, BUT, da dog smelt like poo and he thought it was a putrefaction. He went to his mum's room with a conjecture cause he could not go to sleep but his mum had typhoid fever. The next day he made a cairn for his grandmother that passed two weeks ago. I got the computer and found out it was embedded but luckily I learned about the constitution. It was very important so I payed attention. I went to my grandmother's cairn to memorialize it was a nonviolent time at the cairn because I was sitting with my grandmother. Luckiily my mum is still alive. ^_^



THE END!!

Answer 2

@SolomonZelman @pooja195 @Librarian @just_one_last_goodbye @sissyedgar @acxbox22

Answer 3

Its very nice ^_^

- Libby

Answer 4

but my first impression is impressive ;)

Answer 5

Umm, this is in writing o.o

Answer 6

this is the writing section lol

Answer 7

*coughs* look up

Answer 8

its really good especially for a third grader

Answer 9

OMG i am so sorry :(
OS lag didnt change the section name and i have been helping in math recently
sorry...

Answer 10

lol, ikr my sis is like a dictionary xD

Answer 11

its ok @acxbox22

Answer 12

lol yea

Answer 13

but he vocab for a third grader is awesome

Answer 14

@CallMeKiki do you like it? And acx lol yeah its like she was born with superpowers for vocabulary xD

Answer 15

It's very good. God, in 3rd grade I was writing about unicorns who couldn't stab people with their horns, so they were depressed. Your sister...she's got talent.

Answer 16

lol, i luv it! sadly, i dun even kno wat half them words mean! :P

Answer 17

It was a bit random... lol

Answer 18

caterwauled, interesting word

Answer 19

i had to look that up :)

Answer 20

also looked up cairn:
A cairn is a man-made pile (or stack) of stones.

Answer 21

I feel so dumb. I had look up a couple of words. I'm never going to pass 9th grade! Gah!! :)

Anyway, tell her it was a fantastic story and she is extremely smart. :)

Answer 22

Really good for a 3rd grader.

Answer 23

That's adorable. She's smart! (:

Answer 24

I find it clearly impossible for a 3rd grader to write that.

Answer 25

lol, she did, no lie
I looked at it and I was like, Who wrote this, I looked at Lyndsey (aka, Dashie) and I was like, did you write this? She was like, no. I'm like who did. Heather raised her hand shyly and i about passed out xD

Answer 26

When she gets home, I'm gonna tell her to say thanks

Answer 27

Lol that's cute :)

Answer 28

Man I wish I knew some her vocab when I was in third grade! This is awesome!

Answer 29

That was a very cute story. (^_^) It seems like your sister is very gifted when it comes to her vocabulary! This is sure to give her an advantage later on in life.

Answer 30

I agree, hm she is a nutball sometimes xD

Answer 31

oh my word, the first human dictionary, somebody give that girl an Oscar. <3

Answer 32

She has a large vocabulary for a 3rd grader! Kind of a jumbled story, but she is a 3rd grader. Tell her to keep writing!

Answer 33

Very Good

Answer 34

@CallMeKiki What are you talking about? That story sounds amazing! I would read it.

Answer 35

Haha!