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OpenStudy (anonymous):

These mods get on my nerves anybody else? All I wanna do is pass so I am not a grade behind my 2 friends. Thanks you are so kind.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sometimes the mods can seem annoying, but they're really just here to help. they want to make sure everyone follows the rules and is being kind

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Post this in OS Feedback.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/OpenStudy%20Feedback

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i know a lot of ppl bugged you about your last question, but i think they didn't understand that you just needed help

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

He could have at least attempted to work it out first, not have others do his work.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I did thank you, no one asked. You can ask @nothingwasthesame we were talking and I explained everything. And I am a girl.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I suck and writing and play scenes don't make sense to me.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

This and another assignment was gonna bring my grade up 20 points so that I could pass.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Scene

OpenStudy (nothingwasthesame):

she said how she had attempted it many times and that she neeeded help because she was nt gonna pass this grade and its because she doesnt understand

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Thank you @nothingwasthesame

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Then she could have worded her post better. She could have put down what she had to far.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

*so

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I have nothing because I suck and this assignment is a week late.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

\(\color{blue}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IHateSchoolWork I did thank you, no one asked. You can ask @nothingwasthesame we were talking and I explained everything. And I am a girl. \(\color{blue}{\text{End of Quote}}\) May I inquire what "explained everything" means?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

She had asked if I had tried to work on it by myself and I said yes multiple times but it wasn't turning out right and that I have taken so much time trying to work on this that I am a week behind. I promise I am being honest I have a lot of home problems going on right now and trying to deal with that and my grades has been hard and it has brought them down a lot I use to be a straight A student and now I'm failing

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Ok, what do you have so far. You said that you had started on it.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

No I said I tried working on it by myself and I didn't work.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Did you refer to the link I gave?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I am about to.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Ok.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

It's very simple if you know the story you've read very well.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

It's the myth Icarus and Daedalus.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

So the play will date back to ancient greek times, right?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Correct.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

So you would need a setting for that.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Those are usually above on mountains, and has a lot of those pillar columns.

OpenStudy (nothingwasthesame):

bye i hope y'all work it out :)

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

I have to leave in like 5 minutes, I have hw too.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Uhm in the beginning the dad Daedalus and the son Icarus got locked in jail

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Well, I didn't know that...

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

So what does it have to be based on? They escaped from jail using man-made wings and you have to write a scene about that?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The story is about the dad gets the idea to make wings and they fly away. The dad says not to fly to high or the wax will melt and if he fly's to low he will drown well the sun is so pretty he flys higher then falls into the ocean because the wings fell apart and he drowned

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yes it has to be a scene based on the whole story

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Ok. \(\bullet\) Write a intro, like for example, "DAEDALUS and ICARUS, father and son, scheme to escape the prison of their demise.... etc. etc. \(\bullet\) Create dialogue between them, how they got the materials and tell how Daedalus was a great inventor that makes astounding inventions. \(\bullet\) Tell how they escaped (Flew out the window, etc.) \(\bullet\) Explain how the Sun was hot that day, and how Icarus was dazzled by it, and include dialogue from the story. \(\bullet\) Try to describe how he fell from Daedalus's point of view. That's all I can give you...I have hw to do now.

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Oh and on that link I gave you, there's a sample on what your paper should look like. It should be very short.

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