Question

Alright, everyone. I have a poem to show. Please tell me if you like it, and let me know!

The Sea I See
"A white canvas, I see.
The paint on a palette is glistening.
With a brush in my hand, I think:
What shall I make out of this beautiful sea?
Adding a brushstroke, another, and another;
Listening to the waves of the sea
And enjoying the sounds of this beautiful place,
I add a brushstroke of blue, another of beige,
Another of yellow for the sun I shall paint.
And, like I asked before,
What shall I make out of this beautiful sea?"

Answer 1

its nice

Answer 2

thanks! :)

Answer 3

I like it. :D

Answer 4

it really is a work of art

Answer 5

thanks everyone!

Answer 6

haha i just saw that the first statement i put in my "question" rhymes too!

Answer 7

it is nice

Answer 8

it does

Answer 9

wow! i have an awesome crowd...:)

Answer 10

yes u do

Answer 11

EVERYBODIES AWESOME sing this like a song

Answer 12

*awesome guitar solo*

Answer 13

https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0CB4QtwIwAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DATub40Npxik&ei=JasRVa6qBMqkyAT3ooKoBQ&usg=AFQjCNFPAtQkLD8bb8aYrsEtPKsjyhLnXw&sig2=C9526OvsEa8CS6oPslauWQ&bvm=bv.89184060,d.aWw

Answer 14

Your poem is AWESOME! I like it

Answer 15

lovit

Answer 16

i love it!

Answer 17

I it is very nice. Did you write it yourself?

Answer 18

he or she that wrote this did write it themselves because if u search it on google there is no sin of it

Answer 19

i mean sign of it

Answer 20

say i if this a good poem i

Answer 21

type it

Answer 22

wow you guys are nice:)

Answer 23

yep we are

Answer 24

and yes i did write it myself :o

Answer 25

i new it.

Answer 26

Ok. That's enough nice comments for now. I'm going to close my "question", and thank everyone who commented, because i saw no mean comments!

Answer 27

Bye everyone!

Answer 28

bye

Answer 29

aurevoir!