One of the best that I wrote...at least I think so. Whatd yall think tho?

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redeemed1312 · Answer

Go ahead and break my heart...its been broken before.
Go ahead and make me cry....I already have tears in my eyes.
Go ahead and give me the razor...its not like i havent used it once before.
Go ahead and take away the food.....ive starved myself once already.
Go ahead and give me the bottle.....maybe thisll work.
Go ahead and give me the rope....its time I end it all.
Go ahead and tell me you love me....but we both know your lying. Go ahead and make priorities...I already know im not of the many.
Go ahead and beat me...he did that a few monthes ago.
Go ahead and break me.....itll only make me and my trust issues stronger.
Cause the famous line "What doesnt kill you makes you stronger" has become my life line.
So go ahead and say good bye
I should have known that you would cut my life line.
You didnt see I was winning and your still losing.
So go ahead and say good bye for the last time.
Ive heard that line time after time.

redeemed1312 · Answer

@5sauselover21  @akonkel  @jeffyblood @Tazmaniadevil  @PRAETORIAN.10  @LiteNing1337  @Destinycholie  @MakaylaTracy

akonkel · Answer

wow this is AMAZING!! i luv it!! nice work!!! :DD

redeemed1312 · Answer

Haha YAY! Im glad someone likes it lol

akonkel · Answer

lol not jst someone, EVERYONE!!! :DD

anonymous · Answer

Your an amazing writer!! This is great!!!!!

redeemed1312 · Answer

Lol nah not everyone and thanks @maka777  It means a lot lol

akonkel · Answer

haha well i do ^.^ u put good effort into it :)

redeemed1312 · Answer

Thanks this was one i actually wrote about someone -.- not good memories bu like i said......it only made me stronger!

akonkel · Answer

atlest it made u stronger thou :)

redeemed1312 · Answer

Exactly! :)

akonkel · Answer

:)

litening1337 · Answer

Feels good to be back in this subject. XD

This is a good poem. You should write more. :)

redeemed1312 · Answer

We'll see @LiteNing1337  Lol

litening1337 · Answer

Hue hue. x3

redeemed1312 · Answer

"hue hue"? Really? xD

anonymous · Answer

this is amazing love it !!!!!!!!!!

redeemed1312 · Answer

Are yall being honest cause i wanna know if theres anything i should fix.

redeemed1312 · Answer

@Megan30400

megan30400 · Answer

amazing love it

redeemed1312 · Answer

:) Thanks love! <3

elonasushchik · Answer

I lav it @redeemed1312

redeemed1312 · Answer

Thanks @ElonaSushchik  that means a lot!

elonasushchik · Answer

Anytime hunny bunny! @redeemed1312