Question

Can someone tell me if these two sentences sound right? if not, tell me how to fix them? thanks

Answer 1

Romeo and Juliet is a tragic love story, but which is it more: a tragedy, or a love story? In Shakespeare's play, two peoples' love turns into two peoples' deaths.

Answer 2

That actually sounds pretty well written to me. :)

Answer 3

thanks
any other opinions?

Answer 4

grammar ok?

Answer 5

Remember to put the title (Romeo and Juliet) in italics or in quotation marks. :3

Answer 6

ill help

Answer 7

thank you @hugsnotughs

Answer 8

is this 8th grade work

Answer 9

A pleasure.

Answer 10

no. 9th grade honors

Answer 11

ok i can help even though im in 7th

Answer 12

ok...

Answer 13

take which out after but

Answer 14

mm idk. i was going for the colon

Answer 15

but thanks