Hello, can anyone help me with my Sociology homework and edit this please?

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anonymous · Answer

@andrewhaze @badi @cupcakerain @Dedi @freckles @Goku-Kai @Hami1017 @IrishBoy123 @iamabarbiegirl

anonymous · Answer

@autumnm @autumnm @badi @brittanydosey @CallMeKiki @deana99 @freckles @Godlovesme @Joel_the_boss @linn99123 @Melissa_Something @brooklyn<3you

deana99 · Answer

what do you need help with

anonymous · Answer

I need help with editing the document.

irishboy123 · Answer

did you write this yourself?

anonymous · Answer

Yes I did.

anonymous · Answer

@IrishBoy123

irishboy123 · Answer

i think its really good.

no idea what level you are at or whether you just want some grammar tips or whatever.

i get the impression from it that you are left of centre.  this is not  a personal comment but were you ask to make it unbiased or to give your view.

t many refs to "i was surprised" in it too.  

the bit at the top of the 2nd page after the : is bad english and needs a tweak.

anonymous · Answer

College freshman. You know you can make edits on the doc if you want. It would be easier.

anonymous · Answer

@badi @freckles @CallMeKiki