PLEASE HELP!
Which of these corrects the shift of voice in the following sentence?

Nakamura was praying for protection when the front door was flung open by force.
A prayer for protection was being said by Nakamura when a force flung the front door open.
Nakamura was praying for protection when a force flung the front door open.
Nakamura was praying for protection when the front door was flung open by the police.
A prayer for protection was being said by Nakamura when the police flung the front door open.

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PLEASE HELP!
Which of these corrects the shift of voice in the following sentence?

Nakamura was praying for protection when the front door was flung open by force.
A prayer for protection was being said by Nakamura when a force flung the front door open.
Nakamura was praying for protection when a force flung the front door open.
Nakamura was praying for protection when the front door was flung open by the police.
A prayer for protection was being said by Nakamura when the police flung the front door open.

anonymous · Answer

idk what do u think?

anonymous · Answer

The word shift would mean to actually move around.

anonymous · Answer

Pick what seems main to you the most that you think can catch an readers attention, that surely can help because you can get more engaged in what is going on the most with the big picture.