Question

My heart was once broken
My heart was in two
But now my heart is falling
It is falling deep for you
You’ve got me going crazy
I am out of my mind
Thinking of the thought
Is it true luv with you I will find
I am falling in love fast
But I don’t know if it is true
All I know is that I will always
Want to be with you
So I hope you feel the same
cuz with out you I am lost
Ill never give you up ur worth more than gold
And no one can pay that cost
My new poem how do ya like

Answer 1

Wow that was a deep and amazing poem good job.

Answer 2

thank you @conrad757 i try i have another one too

Answer 3

great poem :)

Answer 4

thx i realy try i am closeing this so i can post my new one i just finnished in a minute

Answer 5

u should tag people

Answer 6

like who

Answer 7

@!DakotaM!
@andrewhaze
@AnswerMyQuestions
@Whitestuffing
@Quan99
@sweetburger
@sissyedgar

Answer 8

@jazzyspazzy

Answer 9

@Micah1mcdugle

Answer 10

@bohotness

Answer 11

@mbailey436

Answer 12

tell me whut you guys really think of it

Answer 13

I like it @FateRocks8D

Answer 14

i mean ireally like it a lot

Answer 15

thx @Micah1mcdugle

Answer 16

OMG!
IT RLLY... DEEP
I LUV IT!
THTS THE KINDA POEM THT WUD LIKE.. SALE IN A STORE!
:P

Answer 17

ha khool like how much

Answer 18

@sissyedgar ^

Answer 19

IDK!
U CUD JUST SALE THT 1 OR MAKE A LITTLE BOOK!

Answer 20

:)

Answer 21

@Thehulk49

Answer 22

i could make a book bc i am righting more

Answer 23

THT WUD B KEWL!

Answer 24

Words can't even describe how I feel :)

Answer 25

thx

Answer 26

aww thx @Thehulk49

Answer 27

@FateRocks8D

Answer 28

@LunyMoony

Answer 29

who is @FateRockes8D

Answer 30

:P

Answer 31

this poem is the best one I have ever read in my life good job hun

Answer 32

thankyou i have a nother one coming

Answer 33

If you accept critical theories then keep this poem, read a book or two on poetry, then rewrite this to what it is in your mind.

Answer 34

its perfect its honesty coming from the soul lol and its amazing lol right Fate :)

Answer 35

@LunyMoony yes i do accept i realy apreciate it bc it helps make me better

Answer 36

I am sorry, stuck_at_school, and it is wonderful that you think that way!

Answer 37

sorry for what

Answer 38

@LunyMoony

Answer 39

just keep it up and you will do gud and remember the best stuff comes from the heart and not just a great thinker 9 times out of ten your not the only one thinking it

Answer 40

your just the only one who got it out

Answer 41

just being critical, not everyone knows how to accept. you are a prize and jewel to take it! thank you!

Answer 42

yw

Answer 43

@Micah1mcdugle