Frank lifted Audrey's head off the concrete. She was still in a daze. The hockey puck had sailed out into the audience and popped her in the forehead. "What happened?" she asked. "The last thing and then I'm on the how did I get here?"
How should Audrey's response be punctuated to show that she is stunned
"What happened?" she asked. "The last thing. And then I'm on the how did I get here?" "What happened?" she asked. "The last thing and then. I'm on the how. Did I get here?" "What happened?" she asked. "The last thing . . . and then I'm on the . . . how did I get here?" "What happened?" she asked. "The last . . . thing. And then I'm on the. How did I get here?"
what do yo think?
@Coolguy25
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I would go with the 3rd choice, "What happened?" she asked. "The last thing . . . and then I'm on the . . . how did I get here?" Becuase if your read it on 1st person point of view, that choice will make more sense
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