Trapped away, everything is getting worse,
just flutter the rules, forget the past,
for it’s just a memory,
don’t slip away, don’t give in,
for out there is a devil’s master piece.

tell me what you think and how i can make it better!

Question

Trapped away, everything is getting worse,
just flutter the rules, forget the past,
for it’s just a memory,
don’t slip away, don’t give in,
for out there is a devil’s master piece.

tell me what you think and how i can make it better!

anonymous · Answer

i would put this under writing for more feedback