Question

I NEED YOUR HELP GIRLS PLEASE HELP ME

Answer 1

Hey @deana99 what's your question?

Answer 2

I need help with a story

Answer 3

Like some feedback/proofreading/or like a topic help?

Answer 4

what do you mean

Answer 5

What part of your story do you need help with?

Answer 6

@CountryGurl15 @nothingwasthesame @Gatorgirl

Answer 7

all of it

Answer 8

Do you know what you're writing about? Do you have a topic you need to write about, or are you just writing something for fun?

Answer 9

yes

Answer 10

Okie doke. What are you writing about?

Answer 11

about love

Answer 12

Ok. Sort of like a poem then?

Answer 13

yes

Answer 14

Ok, we should probably know a little about love first. What do you think love is, or what are some things you love?

Answer 15

i want it to be about my bf

Answer 16

@~SierraBozarth~

Answer 17

Ok. So you can write about the things you like about your bf. Then go on to state why he makes you happy. Or how you feel when you're together.

Answer 18

ok i love the way he makes me smile and blush and he makes me happy because he sweet and loving and he cares about me

Answer 19

We can put all of those things into a poem. Do you have a certain way you want it to rhyme or do you want it to be like free verse?

Answer 20

no not really

Answer 21

Ok. I'll start something out, and you can see if you want to add to it. Just a second.

Answer 22

oh and that he's happy even if he has cancer

Answer 23

You're the one who makes me smile
The one who makes my day worth while
You're always there for me
even when you're not always well
You're always there for me
I'll keep our secrets, I'll never tell.

If you don't like that, you can change it up. But that's just a beginning part. You can add whatever you want to it, or you don't even have to use that at all.

Answer 24

Sorry, I'm not much of a poet :/

Answer 25

its really good

Answer 26

i will brb

Answer 27

Thanks. Like I said, you can use that, or change it up, or just not use it at all. I just kind of put words together and see what rhymes.

Answer 28

ok ty

Answer 29

Great poem! @k_lynn

Answer 30

Thanks.

Answer 31

You are welcome! :)

Answer 32

@jeffyblood

Answer 33

Yes @deana99 what do you need

Answer 34

I need help with a love story