Question

poem read comment let me know what u truly think

critics are not only invited but encouraged

Answer 1

I don’t mean to hurt people,
Or to be the person I’ve become.
I just forget sometimes.
Become delusional…
And the worlds just some trees
Waiting for the volcano to explode.
I’m going to explode…
So I keep writing to distract
From who I’ve become
And who I’m afraid that I meant be.
Not a victim
But another crime.
Seen through stain glass.
As just another dream.
But real world actions
Are put it in concreate.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

omg god child this si amazing keep up the good work really nothing needs hcange

Answer 4

@MakaylaTracy thanks

Answer 5

no problem

Answer 6

@redeemed1312

Answer 7

I love it!!!

Answer 8

@Heypips cool thanks

Answer 9

This is so well-written. I love it! The words you choose are always so powerful, your poems always have meaning and are inspirational. Good job, keep it up. I love reading what you write!

Answer 10

@horsegirl27 im so glad thanks

Answer 11

you're welcome

Answer 12

I have thought that often, in some ways. writing as a mask or a rabbit trail so that people don't see everything and using it to keep myself from exploding...

Answer 13

@geneticrockhopper247 lol im glad u liked it

Answer 14

thumbs up from me

Answer 15

reminds me of me lol... amazing

Answer 16

@Ravenn thanks

Answer 17

@lillymbug thanks