Question

Hi Everybody! I love you all and I have made a poem in regard to the Good Friday. Please comment.

Answer 1

Hey Everybody!
Several fathers and mothers left uncovered
Their lovely and valuable daughters.
Strength, defense, offense, flesh and delivery...
Had all been applicable by many humans under the influence of the Satan.
Without noticing, they are worshiping him.
Whoever can, please help them.
Save them.
Blend with them
and do not let them follow the tricky road that extends straight into the Devil's den.
We should not be expectantly commiting sins,
But making scenes with schemes and themes
of peace, relief, happiness, persistance, interest, anxiety and strive for the good.
It is ironic that our flesh is red and not white.
Indeed we have white bones
that reflect the peacefulness in our flesh.
As now and onwards,
please sacrifice, strive, dwell, propel and help yourself, as well as the others.
May peace be upon us.
Happy Good Friday,
my brother from another mother
and my sister from the ancient scriptures!

Answer 2

Cool

Answer 3

:) .

Answer 4

haha @conqueror

Answer 5

I like most of it

Answer 6

Good job!

Answer 7

Thanks.

Answer 8

np

Answer 9

You did VERY GOOD so I metaled you

Answer 10

Thank you @Rosalinda03.

Answer 11

I think this is a wonderful poem, it has a great message, you are a great poet.

Answer 12

Wow! That was awesome :)

Answer 13

Really?! Thanks guys!

Answer 14

@Hoslos So I just read this and my heart broke into pieces, this is soooo deep but it's really meaningful... makes me wanna reflect on my inner soul

Answer 15

Awww, how lovely. I am happy for you now! I have the habit of writing poems for international holidays, so I will try see when to write the next one. You all just wait!

Answer 16

Oh girl I am tempted already!!! You’re so shweet like cinnamon rolls and lollipops XD

Answer 17

Whooo, nice one there!

Answer 18

Awesome

Answer 19

What a beautiful and dazzling poem I just read! It took my breath away...you are an amazing poet! (^_^) *Gives two thumbs up* Belated Happy Good Friday to you!

Answer 20

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!

Answer 21

that was really awesome...:)

Answer 22

good job :P

Answer 23

very nice