Question

Heylo Guys. I started on a song and this is all I have.{WARNING:I was depressed when writing} Also If you have edits feel free to say 'em

Answer 1

Pacing The Floor
Can't Take it Anymore
Gotta Know the Truth
Is it Worth Going through?
Did I say Enough
When things got rough?
I stress the less
Forget the rest
Never thought I'd live life like this
Wanting To end It....
Saying Thing I never thought I'd say
Does it stay this way?
No one cares
I'm all alone
Reliving the Same Song
Living Life so wrong

Again It isn't finished,so give me some feedback

Answer 2

not bad

Answer 3

Thanks @teresar7

Answer 4

@robzilla-muzzle33

Answer 5

@Awolflover1

Answer 6

and Thing in line 11 is meant to be Things

Answer 7

ok!

Answer 8

is that your first song?

Answer 9

Not at all its my least favorite tho

Answer 10

well if it is witch I think it`s pretty cool

Answer 11

Thank's

Answer 12

If you want we could skype or something because I just came up with a good tempo for it when I gave it a try.

Answer 13

I don't have a Skype,sorry

Answer 14

do you have an email

Answer 15

Not Exxactly{I had one but I don't have access to it}

Answer 16

Very good! Songs that you have written yourself are meant to express what your feeling! And you did a good job!!

Answer 17

Thank's

Answer 18

I liked it....is that the first verse?

Answer 19

Yeah,It's in the works.

Answer 20

Nice. I really like it. That is how most of my writings are.

Answer 21

Oh Cool,