Question

Please help!

Answer 1

Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Answer 2

The bold sentences are but my father disliked hail more and but he hated hail more.